第7次课作业 online shopping vs tranditional shopping

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老师您好，这是我的第7次课作业，如果有时间请你指证，谢谢！

Shopping usually can bring some happniness to people,and even people can feel relaxed only to view the merchandise by vitrine.but with the development of e-commerce, online shopping has become more and more daily. What benefits of online shopping?What difference between online shopping vs. traditional shopping?

Online shopping is more convenient and not limited to the time and site.you can online shopping at all times and places.when we finished work at the daytime at the time person,and it later to go home,and then go shopping is difficult, because maybe the brick-and-mortar may be closed,and then the online shopping becoming the fastest ,convenient, lovely shopping way. Traditional store have its business hours and we cannot go shopping at any time.

Online shopping is more cheaper than traditional shopping because the online store not need cost money to rent store and others cost.so we can direct buy more cheaper merchandise.Traditional store have great rent and human cost so that the merchandise is more expensive to online shopping.

The online store has lots of options, online shopping can select merchandise from several stores in time and can require the most information, traditional stores only buy at your local shopping mall, so the selection is limited.

Online shopping because cannot see the product personally,so when we receive the good that is may be have a quality problems.But the traditional store we can the product personally,How the product quality?the product material quality,if it is clothes,we can try it whether fit,but the online store cannot do it.

Online shopping needs to wait three or five days to receive the goods,if there are exceptional cases, the logistics will defer,then we will receive the goods later,but the traditional shopping can take the merchandise at once.

So we can pick shopping way by our needs!

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Western Form of Education and Chinese Form of Education

Nowadays, more and more people in China tend to like western form of education and want their children to go abroad or study in international schools. But what is education in western form? What are the differences between education in western form and that in Chinese form? Is one better than the other one? Experienced educations in both culture, I have right to contrast these two. Now let's have a look.

To start with, two education systems have different marking systems. The education in western way gives students different grades such as A, A-, B, B+ and F(fail) whereas Chinese teachers often give marks like 100,60(pass),0 etc. Different systems of grades both divide students to different class. And in order to get into good schools, students in both system need to work hard but the western education also value grades in the learning process rather than the final marks earned at the end of the semester, for example, Gaokao in Chinese education system. It means students need to work hard all through the semester to earn greater GPA as well as do extra activities outside the classrooms. What's more, students need to have recommantary letters from their teachers if they want to apply to the university in western high school.

Besides, western way of education emphasizes on doing and experimenting. On the other hand, Chinese education emphasizes on learning from teachers and following instructions. In Chinese schools, students have a large amounts of homework to do to make sure they understand the knowlege and can use them well in the practice. But in western schools they often learn science by doing experiments or finishing a project and learn English literature by imitating the poems and writing them by themselves. The two system have a big difference.

Subsequently, in western education students are allowed to have individualistic personalities and their independent thinking. For example, there is a subject called thinking scientifically in western high school. It raises discussions toward questions like "The Trolley Problem" in order to provoke students to think indepedently and form their own anwers and reasons. Also, students can feel free to ask questions to teachers and question the validity of what their teachers say. All these form students' independent personalities and individualities. On the contrary, Chinese version of education emphasizes more on the authorities of teachers and rules and more on sense of honor for the whole group. Chinese students respect their teachers more than western students and also respect the ancient ancestors and rules. If one student does not follow instruction, he or she would be penalized based on his or her behavior because Chinese education emphasizes more on cultivating the respects for rules and experiences. At the same time, the sense of honor for the whole group and community rather than for oneself is valued more. The schools in China usually organize sports competition, students usually compete and earn points for their class rather than winning MVPs. The two educations cultivate different kinds of spirits for their students.

Futhermore, schools in China often focus on the good grades and the ability to manage to solve different problems in the exams in order to get into better schools. So Chinese students tend to have stable mind status for challenges.Yet, western schools often emphasize on improving students' personal qualities and abilities. Students form their values for life and values for the world in the school.

As a proverb once said, “Each place has its own way of supporting its own inhabitants”. Different systems cultivate different values and thus produce different students. Which one you like better?


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6.27 修改后的作文（我的问题：首字母大写，空格问题，人称一致，统一中心思想，句子之间要有逻辑关系，不能有语法错误）
                                                                                      Tranditional shopping and online shopping
Traditional shopping and online shopping have become the two major trends in today's society. Some people like traditional shopping, while others benefit from online shopping. What are their strengths and weaknesses? What is the difference between them?
It is universally known that traditional stores have fixed business hours that people cannot buy things at the shopping close-up.But  People can online shopping at all times and places. Online shopping is more convenient. Such as employees who are busy with work and arrive home late and want to buy something, but the traditional stores have ended their business store, Online shopping has its superiority at this time.
Online shopping is more cheaper than traditional shopping which can save money for people. Because the online store does not need to cost money to rent store and other costs. So we can directly buy more cheaper merchandise. Traditional stores have great rent and human costs which make it do not have price advantage.
The online store has lots of options, online shopping can select merchandise from several stores in time and can get large information, traditional stores only buy at people's local shopping malls, so the selection is limited.
People receive goods that may have quality problems for online shopping. Because people cannot see the product personally for online shopping, But in the traditional store people can check the product personally. How is the product quality? what are the product materials? People can try the clothes to check whether well that is what the online store cannot do.
Online shopping needs to wait three or five days to receive the goods,  and if there are exceptional cases and the logistics are deferred, then we will receive the goods later, but traditional shopping can take the merchandise at once.
So people can pick the shopping way by their needs and fancy.